Greetings, all!
Today we find out a little bit more about Luk and his world:
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Grabbing his compad, Luk accessed the internal schematics of the Ark. Master Jon’s laboratory was located in the third Ring, making the storage room one of the outermost spaces in the Ark. According to Luk’s Engineering class, that meant there were no other spaces beyond except superstructure, then exoskin, then…nothing. The schematics confirmed it. The back storage room was a rectangular space, labeled Storaj Lokker 3-3-639677—XAP. Luk didn’t know what an XAP designation meant—and neither did the schematic legend, apparently—but the schematics showed no irregularity in the room.
Curiosity poked at Luk. He knew he should alert Master Jon to the inaccuracy, but this was something different. Like him, it was not quite the way it was supposed to be. An Old Erth word came to mind—misteree.
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‘Til next time!
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Hmmmm, that’s interesting. I’m intrigued by the uses of incorrect spelling of “Erth” words. Nice Hook.
Loving this. Can’t wait til next week!
Nice hook.
Very interesting. I’m curious what the anomaly is. Nice hook.
i’m really enjoying the world and the character you created. wonder if he’ll solve the mystery. good hook. thanks for sharing. 🙂
C.R.
I’m definitely wanting to know more about this world so I understand it better. Good job!
Interesting. I haven’t read a scifi in a while, and this has definitely captured my interest. Can’t wait to see more!
I love this story (maybe cuz I’m a sci-fi geek), lol. You’ve created such a vivid and imaginative world. I’m very intrigued by Luk. I can’t wait to see what will happen next.